Parted

Parted

A Poem by goldie uttamchandani
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A poem about being separated from your love

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At first I believed it was to be forever
Deep down I knew 
You knew too 
Couldn’t let go, never
But truth is I could have been more clever 
How does one play smart in love?
I always wore you on me like the perfect glove 
I know even today it’s only you I think of
Parted we were 
Circumstance gave us no choice                          
I wanted to say so much
But swallowed my voice
I still talk to you 
Every night I do
I’m sure you know that too
Layers of ours still seep through my veins 
I do smile but it pains
For there are now only remains 
Treasured moments shared
Emotions declared
Today fragments of my heart, impaired.
I keep close the vision of our caress
Thankful for those moments where I was blessed 
Parted for reasons we no longer express     
Buried deep down
My king you are, but this queen no longer wears your crown
In friendship I have found my answer 
Destiny leads me, I am the marionette dancer
Fate etched our separation long before we cried 
We fought the torrents and tide
An undercurrent will always swim through me
My love for you sings everyday like a plea

© 2015 goldie uttamchandani


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Thank you once again for sharing such beautiful, flowing lines and sensitive thoughts...

Posted 9 Years Ago


Great piece of work! Has much emotion and clear love is still there, I
went through a divorce after15 years that nearly killed me and thought
I would never recover but I have with the Lords help and
still have much love for my ex, no respect but much love!
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Wow - great poem, with such clear and unique expressions of the pain and disappointment, and your enduring love. Thanks for sharing :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


goldie uttamchandani

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much again.. for appreciating my writing!
Yellowpinch

9 Years Ago

You're welcome - keep it up!

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Added on March 3, 2015
Last Updated on March 3, 2015
Tags: love, separation, parted, pain, melancholy

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goldie uttamchandani
goldie uttamchandani

Barcelona, Spain



About
Hi, my name is Goldie and I was born and brought up in Spain, and am of Indian origin. I currently live in Barcelona, with my husband and two children. I am a lover of poetry and prose. In 2014 my fir.. more..

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