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Compartment 114
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Ellipsis

Ellipsis

A Poem by goldie uttamchandani
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The words that are not said, are felt.

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I think about you more than I think about myself 
I'm willing to hold my breath 
So you my dear can take the air for yourself 

I know vices can be lethal
You drink and smoke
I indulge in loving you 

You complain I don't say I love you enough
I've carved you in me so deep
You've never bothered to see what lies below my cuff

In your torrid sexual desires you demand I express my romance
It's in the ellipsis where you fail to absorb my zest

Uncomfortable silences you call them
It's in the quiet I can hear the waves that collide against your wild oceans 

I have to hold your hand tight you say
My sleeve already wears you everywhere I go

I don't praise you enough
But if I told you that my flaws fail to exist because you, only you have the power to bring out my perfection

My best friend you call me
We both know we have never only been friends 
Disallow yourself from merely floating
Let's swim together 

© 2015 goldie uttamchandani


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Such powerful words unspoken but written upon the heart...enjoyed reading this very much; it is the pauses and the silences in our lives with others that magnify the sound of the love we truly give. Looking forward to reading more of your work.

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Added on March 26, 2015
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goldie uttamchandani
goldie uttamchandani

Barcelona, Spain



About
Hi, my name is Goldie and I was born and brought up in Spain, and am of Indian origin. I currently live in Barcelona, with my husband and two children. I am a lover of poetry and prose. In 2014 my fir.. more..

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