Stranger

What I felt when she ignored me.

When someone comes, in front of her

I just become, a total stranger

Her ignorance or, her behavior

My heart feels a pain, that is severe

But I wonder, that does she bother

But I realize, I was a stranger

I am a stranger and, I will be a stranger

No matter if she care, her love will remain

In my heart, Forever Forever Forever

Reviews

[Deepak Belbase]

You did it very well... I like your writing style... But overall subject was not enough for the survival... Your writing is interesting but not quite​ strong so reader can get involved so deeply... Your writing style tell me another story. You can write even better. But that doesn't mean it's not good... Maybe​ you should try another version... Little descriptions can help you... Keep it up bro

[Andromeda Lee]

This is really nice. I'm definitely not an expert, but I like your writing style. The poem was steady and easy to read. I especially likes the first two lines. Nice job, Nitin. :)

[Nitin]

Thanks a lot for reading and reviewing

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this is a nice, sentimental poem. I enjoy your writing style. well done

[Nitin]

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I am flattered by your comment.