nested

love showed everything

He is the one who makes me smile,

He is the one who lends me crying,

He is the one whom I love,

He is the one whom I trust,

He is the one without him I'm

Nothing

Lacking

Tracking

Breaking

And he is the one in whose love

I'm nesting…

 

Nested in his love

Doping in his eyes

Making in his smile

Laughing in his words

And trying in his thoughts…

 

Waking up and smiling

 Picking up and crying

 

He is the only one who

Has the charm

Of making me smile

And of carrying in his arms …

 

I'm nested in his love

Love which brings everything to me

Love which showed a caring feeling for me...

 

Author's Note

Another piece ,sharing my feelings.
Please do comment!!!!!!

Reviews

[Daydreamer54]

I like it! it;s very sweet! :)

[Cynthia]

That's a good poem!
I love this one.

[~~~~~]

Emotional, bearing all from heart song. Your piece sounds like lyrics. It would be interesting to hear if set to music and uploaded. Very nice, sincere. What lover wouldn't be honoured to have this written about them?

[Nancy S.]

Great job, Lavina. You bring the point to bear with enthusiasm and style.

[Ashley]

it flows very well and is gripping. the emotions are clear the lines of the poem are very true. well done

[Sports Girl]

Good job. I like the poem

[Dream Weaver]

Are you sure he's the one?
just kidding, well written.
I enjoyed this very much :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Nesting is a different way to express being surrounded by love and being content. I like the poem. You create a special poem with the emotion of being happy and feeling safe. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

[TheOther]

A good attempt in this sheer expression of love.

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

a lovely intimate poetic song to the beloved~