Our love

I love him and he too...that makes our love perfect :)

Darling come along

And sing a song

A Song for me

And belong to thee

 

I love the way you called me

I pleasure the things you did near me

I hope to be yours forever

I tried to be in your arms ever

 

I dreamed to the side of love

Which makes me to think of you with a tear

I belong to the memories of the past

Which gave me pleasure to the soul of my dear

 

I shriveled when you touched me

I tried when you went away

I broken up when you kissed me

I fly when you brings a Way

 

You drop your knees down

You crop when I said "YES"

 

You smiled when you saw me doing the same

That showed your height of being in love

You kissed when you saw me close

That showed your trueness of being in love

 

With all the love you gave

I can say you love me

With all the tears you shed

I can say you love me

 

And with all the love you have

I can say "I LOVE YOU"

 

Author's Note

I wanted to share some of my feelings related to love. I know i didn't did any justice to my writing, but from so many days i stopped writing. So i wrote one just now and posted it.
Hope you like. And please will be pleasured with all sort of comments.
Love you all!!!

Reviews

[Emilee Grimm]

Love is a beautiful and priceless thing that not many people completely understand. Love can also be interpreted in so many different ways. I love how the poem flows and allows the reader to form a mini-movie in their head. nice job!!!! Love your work :)

[voices]

A good attempt but am not sure whether love really motivated this poem

[ForTheWorld]

..i love you too, for this is definitely beautiful, awesome!!! I felt the emotions hiding in this poem, brilliant =D

[heich]

love..love..love./.

[Prateeksha Khot]

beautiful :)

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem. The words filled with emotion and desire. Each line adding to the strength of the poem. Love is the best gift we can give or receive. I enjoyed the complete poem. A very good ending to a outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Art]

Sharing is also a big part of love...

nice work...

[Boantlers]

I love this. I sense sincerity. It made me smile.
Great writing.

[The Water Queen]

Love the thing that can make or destroy a person. This was very vivid and lovely. great job.

[TheOther]

Aww love! So beautiful and emotional piece, you did great job here. Well expressed and written, keep it up :)