Fear Darkness

Fear Darkness

A Poem by gorillarock
"

You wake up with no memory...

"

Where am I?

Ugh, why does my chest feel like it's ready to cave in?

My head... my head is stabbing at me. What's going on?

It's dark, wherever this is. Feels like I'm about to f*****g die here, my chest!

I have to feel around, I need to get out of here.

Off the back, here we go...

Nope! Ack, my knee won't bend... this pain... Where am I?!

How did I end up so broken?! So... hard to breathe

The ground is wet?

Please, oh please... let it be water...

Just let it be water... I can't bleed through this too

... Can't see if it's blood...

I have to use my arms, just like a baby

Roll over, crawl, just like a baby

Haae! ... my chest!

I can barely do this, I feel like I'm crushed

... Where the hell am I?! I need to get out of here, I'm scared

So scared, I'm so scared, so-

Crawl! Come on,

Haae! My f*****g chest!

It's so dark, but...

but I think I see someone...

a woman?

“Help!” F**k! Ahye, my head!

How did I end up so broken?!

Did she say something?

Can I still hear? I don't hear anything,

just stabbing in my head.

Just stabbing,

and dark,

I'm scared...

I'm so scared...

© 2018 gorillarock


Author's Note

gorillarock
Skeletons lay in dark corners

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to live is to fear God, not the unknown. thanks for sharing this nice piece.

Posted 6 Years Ago


While reading this, I could picture a person lying on the ground calling out for help. You paint the entire picture. Fear is a powerful thing, completely freezes us. Physically getting hurt is one thing. But this sort of a condition brought out by mental and emotional pain is probably the worst thing we humans witness. The pain in our chest. Those pits in our stomach. Anyone would be scared.

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on April 1, 2015
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gorillarock
gorillarock

Victoria, British Columbia, Canada



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