I'm gone

I'm gone

A Poem by State of Grace

I left

But what can I do now?

Now that I have my freedom?

Nothing

 

I’m lost

Can you help me?

Help me find my way?

You can’t

 

I’m dying

But do you care?

Do you save me?

No

 

I’m gone

Yet my presence still lingers

Can you feel me?

Of course not

 

 

© 2011 State of Grace


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a bit sad, much like a thin piece of paper laying in a puddle.

Posted 8 Years Ago


I could relate to this! I love it...so true.

Posted 8 Years Ago


There's both a hopeful and sad tone to this. It makes you wonder how the speaker is really feeling. Like are they hopeful of a brighter future? Or are they too sad to look towards the light? Such confliction makes a great write. Thanks for sharing!

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Really sad yet lovely!

Posted 8 Years Ago


OMG!!! Luvvv ittttt

Posted 8 Years Ago



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State of Grace

~lost in my mind but couldn't care less~, LA



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