Response

Response

A Poem by Thaddius

It would

mean a lot

if you could write

to say

you hate me

and can't

tolerate

my stupid face

 

I wish you'd be

a little less

ambiguous

otherwise

I'm left with

tons of angry girls

who make no sense

and when I try

to figure out

what bomb went off

 the body parts

just flip me off

and drag me down

 

It would be

really great

if you could

take the time

to say you're sorry

for the trouble

you just don't like me

thanks anyway

for playing

© 2015 Thaddius


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This has so much truth in it...it really would be great if people could be honest!

Posted 4 Years Ago


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This is so raw, so real. I really love that there weren't any periods, commas, semi-colons, etc, which make it seem like a quick flow of your real thoughts. A lot of your others poems tell stories that don't always relate directly to you (as I can see), but this one seems very personal, I applaud you for sharing. This was great.

Posted 5 Years Ago



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Thaddius
Thaddius

Hollywood, CA



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