The X Wives

The first one blocked me,

The second one unfriended me

The third one ignores me

"your poetry is s**t, you scum sucking, f*****g a*****e,"

And I smile 

and stand alone

bulbous engorged poem 

in hand,

c**k or pen ?

confused;

I told you it

was touching ,

just ask

Uncle Rolf.

Reviews

[Gee]

Two little boys had two little toys, each had a wooden horse...
Used to be my party piece until him and his fiddling mates got found out...F**K.
Any man that ends up with another woman after one failed attempt must accept all of the shite that's heaped upon them :)

[gram linski]

You got it Gee, remember the safety swimming ads that the sick f**k did do, tie me kangaroo down, sport takes on different connotations, thanks for reading and commenting,

[Chris Shaw]

My, you are a glutton for punishment, I have to hand it to you. You have your own X wives club. Your poetry isn't s**t. I reserve judgement on the rest of the comment :)

Chris

[gram linski]

Haha, that's what happens when you are charming and handsome and a wee bit destroyed, women flock then flee,

[Chris Shaw]

Modest as well eh? Lol

[jacob erin-cilberto]

having three exes...i hear this one loud and clear...
j.

[gram linski]

haha, thanks j, the more you love, the more you pay,lol

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Love the sardonic wit and the word play as you toy with the reader. Throughout this as the wives peel away and the emptiness of writing or masturbating is all that seems left there is a feeling of being in limbo. And Uncle Rolf touched one too many scooby!

[gram linski]

lol, thanks John, after the sardonic wit and wordplay were gone only the empty wank remained, and you can't build a relationship on that apparrently

[Edie Blue Starfish]

The end was unexpected. Geez.
Well written.

[gram linski]

Thanks Edie, it wasn't unexpected for me, lol, glad you liked it,