To The Wives

To The Wives

A Poem by gram linski
"

To Helen and the crumpled fetid sac of Robidoo

"
He was my 
Best man
and I was his,
(twice)

I thought,

As we shared
A w***e
 
In Amsterdam...

© 2019 gram linski


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Interesting. Straight to the point.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

gram linski

3 Months Ago

Pretty much, thanks for your ambivalent review, lol
Lea Sheryn

3 Months Ago

You're very welcome.
Powerful. Bitter. Angry. Filled with the barbed words of razor wire fashioned to slit the throats of those who have wronged you gram. Powerful Indeed!

Posted 4 Months Ago


gram linski

4 Months Ago

Hey John, everyone seems to think this is some mad malignant rant about trust and fidelity, me and m.. read more
John Alexander McFadyen

4 Months Ago

I was going down that track but thought it disrespectful seeing I had seen some previous comments. H.. read more
You don't like him do ya? Well if that was your wife, then it's perfectly understandable. It's OK to feel aggressive in some circumstances.

Chris

Posted 4 Months Ago


gram linski

4 Months Ago

Not at all, Chris, genuinely love the guy like a brother, he is my brother,
Christine Anne Shaw

4 Months Ago

It's better to love than to hate even if you can't trust. Good afternoon gram.
wow, there is such strong angst in this...a passive aggressive gem of a write.

can't trust that Best Man, can we?

Posted 4 Months Ago


gram linski

4 Months Ago

I never trusted him and he never trusted me, friends for life and shagged each other's wives, lol, I.. read more
Oh. So cryptic. Is the wife the w***e.
A dig at her because of an affair?
Leaves me wondering.

Posted 4 Months Ago


gram linski

4 Months Ago

Thinking too deep, Edie, the w***e was the w***e and we had a threesome at discounted rates, lol not.. read more
Edie Blue Starfish

4 Months Ago

How interesting

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