DIFFERENT FEELING...

Days are passing by,
Nothing is feeling right.
At least I have my loneliness aside,
You never notice that I tried,
A different feeling everyday.

I cared for you from the start,
Even though I make mistakes.
I never wanted to break your heart,
I want to stay, no matter what it takes.

Although this is not the perfect rhyme,
I miss you more and more everyday.
Sometimes it’s hard to pretend,
You were everything but you couldn’t stay.

Knowing that you’re not coming back,
A different feeling is in my mind.
You were my addiction of crack,
You were my comfort on everything I could ever find,
A different feeling consumes me everyday.

Author's Note

Ignore grammar problems or the order of words.

Reviews

[Neville]

A poem full of emotion and hurt.... a good one too..... Neville

[Alexandra G.]

Thanks Neville, I appreciate it!

[Neville]

my pleasure...

[May]

beautifully done, I love it. Really well done.

[Alexandra G.]

Thanks hun!