The Being in the Night

sitting at my bed side is a being  I do not know

it is drak so I can't see anthing but this big yellow eyes

the being looks at me

I look up at it

 the bright yellow eyes staring back at me

who are you i ask and the being said

I am the being

that  only watches you over the night

I am you being

 

Reviews

[NightDream]

You need to correct the spelling and then it would be fairly good. Great try

[Chaos]

I like the poem, but I think you repeated being too much. Try rewriting and use different words for being. I hope you found that helpful

Thank you for sharing your work.

Chaos~

[StormSeeker]

please ignore the spelling