Selfish

Selfish

A Poem by souldude
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This poem is about somebody in my life who is very selfish and doesn't care about anybody but herself.

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Selfishness...
Something you are all too familiar with

Your opinion is correct...
While everyone else's is wrong.

My opinion is wrong...
Unless it matches yours.

My friend's don't matter...
Unless it benefits you.

You don't care about me...
Only your car.

You don't care about me...
Because you're a selfish b***h.

You don't care about anybody...
Because you're the only one that matters.

At least to you...
But to the rest of us...
You're just a b***h.

© 2011 souldude


Author's Note

souldude
It was right off the top of my head, no planning or anything. Please read and rate and review it honestly.

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It started out very well, and the format is refreshing and keeps pace nicely. But when you get the the third and last stanzas, the "You're just a b***h" arguement seems out of place and a but weak.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I like the last stanza the best it made me and Sadie laugh xD
Good poem bro xD

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Apple Valley, MN



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