Rotting Revenant

I'm trying to figure out how to submit this Zombie haiku for today's deadline.

Through loamy soil fresh

Thrusts dank rotted arm and flesh

Natural death denied.

Author's Note

I tried to keep the 5/7/5 traditional haiku structure.

Reviews

[Lord of mad men]

Very nice I love your word choice. It say a lot being of few words. I like the natural death denied it so good. It says a lot it say the undead don't get to rest in peace but to roam not living or truely dead. It just great! Yours truely a mad lord