three words

three words

A Poem by the_stoic

muffled voice, choked emotions

faltering faith, innate apprehension

existential purpose, three words 

unsaid, unexpressed, stay dead...

© 2012 the_stoic


Author's Note

the_stoic
what makes a loving entity decay and finally branded as 'stone hearted' ? i guess i know ...

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I think love dies when we put our relationship second and forget to work together and always put ourselves first or always put our mate first and get left behind. Relationships really are work. YOu have to keep them moving and flowing creating new memories and special moments. Love should be shared and each person working together not separate.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I don't know. Maybe I am a bit naive but I don't think that everybody is heartless. Some of them might definitely be but then, for the remaining, our hearts just tend to follow very different unique rhythms and it is a great miracle when we can find somebody to match our rhythms with, complement us. But that doesn't happen too often. Someone like me relapses into cynicism every time it happens. Maybe, during that phase, I appear 'dead' in your sense of the word. But am I truly dead or am I just recovering from a heartache?

Succinct and crisp. Loved it.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Great use of words. Create a vision of a dead-end conversation. I like the ending a lot. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I think love dies when we put our relationship second and forget to work together and always put ourselves first or always put our mate first and get left behind. Relationships really are work. YOu have to keep them moving and flowing creating new memories and special moments. Love should be shared and each person working together not separate.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on July 22, 2012
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the_stoic

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