Bitter realisation

A Poem by the_stoic

             If love within me isn't shared and doesn't grow
           If my life is an aberration that impedes the spirit's flow
              Then what good am i ,only heaven knows ...

© 2010 the_stoic

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YacobTihstea

This is now one of the best things I've ever read. I just got entirely too much out of this. If I don't find someone to love, will I always be disappointed? If I'm always disappointed does that make me a bad person for never finding any joy in life? Will I be judged as so for my reluctant crime?

You just gave me a lot to think about.

Thank you =D

Posted 13 Years Ago

2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

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NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..

one to ponder ~certainly~ a meditative poetic~

Posted 13 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Liza

a sad reflection that believes love is only worthy if someone values it as such

why are we not content with just loving and living with our skin and eyes...why do we wait for another to validate...

your write triggered that response - thank you for the inspiration

Posted 13 Years Ago

1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

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Added on August 22, 2010
Last Updated on August 24, 2010

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the_stoic

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i won't go about describing myself cause it'll end up as a self deprecatory saga .. my poems are there to speak for me . yesterday mp3 | lyricsfree music downloads | music videos | pictures Guda.. more..