Faith

Faith

A Poem by the_stoic
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was traveling by train on the eve of deepawali, which is a festival of lights and crackers here in India

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Looking out through the railed window bars
i see houses decked with tuning bulbs, glittering like stars
Even the poor man has decorated his hut, the best he can
having a hope that things will change for the better, in his life's span..

© 2011 the_stoic


Author's Note

the_stoic
the image is just a random one ..

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its his "faith" in d higher power...nice wrds...gr8 picture...

Posted 12 Years Ago


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RJM
Must be a beautiful day to visit India. Beautiful imagery, nice poem as always

Posted 13 Years Ago


Yes you are correct. Hope and faith is all we got sometime. A beautiful photo and strong words. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Brillaint~

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is a lovely representation, very worthy of memory. I love the picture, I love the poem.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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This poem speaks volumes in the few short lines that you have painted here. One it describes a festival that I have never heard of two of hope for a better year. The imagery is simply gorgeous and the picture does the poem justice.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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hope is the seed-- the message I got from this wonderful little write

Posted 13 Years Ago


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hopeful look through the darkness into the light....

Posted 13 Years Ago


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ah your back, good and good to see you on form..

Posted 13 Years Ago


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No, I dont really think its random, it some kind of... matching, isnt it?
I love the desciption in the poem, its very real and so much beautiful images flows in my head! Sure everone have the rights to hope as well!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Added on January 18, 2011
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