High Notes Heal.

High Notes Heal.

A Poem by Shalini R

The guitarist

Keeps his eyes to

The strings

And the answering

Floor.

Alone, and his creation.

He sings and the strings sing

Back in

Conflicting harmony.

Tiny condensed tears are

Released

And fall from the

Notes dripping from

Lost love.

 

© 2008 Shalini R


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'Tiny condensed tears are
Released
And fall from the
Notes dripping from
Lost love. '
- This really have the depth that is beyond understanding if you don't re read it.
It's like crying from the unhealed wound. So deeply mourned. Like a decade wound.
Lovely Shalini...simply awesome!
I would love to recieve more of this kind from you.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is an amazing piece.

A very subtle way to evoke a very strong emotion...

And fall from the
Notes dripping from
Lost love.


--what a brilliant ending...

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

beautiful words...

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

d****t shalini. what'd i tell you about making me cry :'(

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

tears falling off the notes, simply divine, thank you for sharing this lovely visual piece~john

Posted 17 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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