My baby sis

I made this poem for my little sister Noor

Sweet little Angel

Sweet rosy cheeks

Sweet innocent eyes

And the sun rise among those teeth

When you smile…

Baby sis…

My heart is bursting love and joy

Whenever I look at you ,

 hug you ,or kiss you

when you sleep between my arms

I feel the mother instincts poking me inside

I swear when you laugh

The stars in your eyes twinkle twice

And when you speak…

Your little words wrapping my ears

like a soft melody by a tweet of a  bird

Baby sis …

Sometimes you drive me crazy! When you play

Insane when you scream ..

But still I can't imagine my life without

Your lovely sound..

Baby sis…

I adore every little thing about you

Your cute braids, your pink dress

Your dolls, your little hands

Even your noise , your mess

All these things makes

A small desire grow inside of me

You make me want to have

Someday… A little princess

To charm my life and put a smile

On my heart before my face

Baby sis …Noor.. the light in our life

I love you ....

Reviews

[Renée]

Oh My Goodness Haldell ! You made me cry ! So precious this is !...Oh you must share this with her always !
I am a baby sister,my sisters are 20 years older,but it doesn't matter...I want you to know... Your little Sister will think you can do anything! ..your words, your actions will affect & influence down to her soul...when you sing..she sings..when you cry, she will cry.. How blessed you both are to have each other !

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

Thank you so much Renee , such a sweet words you have said.
You know between me and my baby sis 20 years also ! i am 25 and she is 5 years old, and she really makes our life different , and i am the eldest among all my brothers and sisters so this is how i felt with each one of them when they was younger , i witnessed their first steps, their first words, i feel so much like i am a second mother after my Mom :) and i love all of them :)

[Renée]

My thoughts are from my heart...for them..you hang the moon !
I was happy to read... such love you have in your heart..

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

^_^ Thank you Renee really i appreciate it , and i am sure that your sister hold such love and much more in her heart for you :)

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Oh my o my!
what a dedication what a gift of love!
Bless you child bless you and the lil one!

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

Thank you ,I'm glad you liked it :)

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

yeh

[Yasmin]

I can relate :)
I love the emotions of joy and innocent that you've drawn
I love how you pictured her
May God bless her (Allah e7meha)
Keep on writing :)

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

Thanks yasmeena

[khalid]

may Allah bless her. kids are GOD's beloved creatures. they really look like angels with their appearance, smell, smile, innocent actions...who wouldnt love kids?

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

No one i believe :) thanks khlaid , may Allah bless your too Ameen :)

[Phillitup]

I am the youngest in my family at 13 years of age with twin. Then I have another sibling who is four years older then the two of us.That completes it. I am even the youngest cousin. I have long yearned for a younger sibling (although I love the ones I have). However, 19 minutes is all that separates me from not being so. Love this write.

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

OMG ! what a lovely saying ^_^
i hope when you big enough , you will marry and have a wonderful kids as lovely as you are :)

[Phillitup]

:)

thanks

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

Welcome :)

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Soooo sweet....

I have two nieces....one is just 10 months now....brings so much joy and happiness....

I can feel those feelings you certainly feel to...

Thanks for sharing this remarkable tender poem :D

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

You are so welcome ^_^ and i believe you will never feel the same way , its a girl thing :P

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

hehehe...perhaps....but I hope I get close to it :)

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

Inshallah when you become a father you will be close to it :)

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

:)

[Samuel Dickens]

This is so very sweet. It not only makes me want to care about your sister, but it also says much about you and your capacity for love.

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

Ohh Thank you so much Sam i really appreciate your sweet review , What can i say this is how i feel in every moment i spent with her ... I think its just mother instincts in every girl :)

[Samuel Dickens]

I've known a few females who didn't have that strong mother instinct, so it warms my heart when I see one that does.

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

Oh God I am flattered ^_^ i think its in my genes , my mother is the most caring loving mother ever...

[Frieda P]

Hadeel, this goes right to my heart. Beautiful, I wish I would have written something so lovely before my sister was gone. Cherish her.

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

Oh .. Frieda , i am sorry if this poem moved your feeling for her
but i am positively sure she already knows that you love her and more
she is always with you in her soul, just keep prying for her, may her soul rest in peace ..

[Frieda P]

No, it's fine, I think it's a lovely tribute to your baby sister...it's bittersweet for me, but I'm smiling through the tears....

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

Oh.. dear , may all your days be filled with happiness and joy and no more tears :)

[Frieda P]

Sometimes tears cleanse the soul, you are sweet to worry, I'm fine, really. :-) xo

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy )]

Yes you are right sometimes tears are a bless :) take care sweet Frieda

[Hadeel ( Charming Fairy..]

This poem inspired by the beauty of my baby sis Noor , she is 5 years old , and i love her so much !