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A Poem by Pleasantly_Furious

I want a thousand hard kisses
A sigh so lasting that
my plastic lungs burst
show me an unstained tongue
cook me carnitas,
wearing nothing

Take my hand
and put it where it hurts
where it aches for something infinite
I can take you to Eden with
just two fingers
your lover doesn't know
what I am capable of

A poet's lips don't miss a beat sweetheart.

© 2017 Pleasantly_Furious

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Raw passion, and yet tempered with a hint of mystery or ambiguity in my mind. Powerful and clever. (and just a very nice piece to read)

Posted 5 Years Ago

I find it very passionate, sensuous, vivacious, caring and tender... in such captivating words. You speak the heart, get yourself so open to him, and let words reveal the feelings of yours you have deep in you toward someone you love the most, and want him doin everything whatever your body longs to be caressed with. Beautifully written. I'm looking forward to reading your work!

Posted 5 Years Ago

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Added on April 7, 2017
Last Updated on April 7, 2017




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