come back ...

come back ...

A Poem by Hamza
"

about love ..

"

And sometimes I wish
I wish I had no heart..
For ever since I felt it,
you were it's part..

 

You came in at a time,
when I was nothing but blank..
and you smiled over me
filling joy, in that empty tank..

 

I longed to see you,
longed to hear you out..
a glimpse, a gesture and
conversations, flowing and stout

 

and then you left never to come back
never to come back to me..
and ever since I've been empty again,
oh please come and set me free ..

 

for you're missed,
missed like I'm missing..
like I'm missing
my own breath..

 

© 2012 Hamza


Author's Note

Hamza
www.fathom83.blogspot.in

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*for you're missed,
missed like I'm missing..
like I'm missing
my own breath..*

your talent speaks for itself
stupefying write

Posted 11 Years Ago


I love the rhyming pattern, I love your choice of words, so simple, yet so powerful. Wonderful job.

Posted 11 Years Ago


I could feel the pain of this loss of love. But one can never be whole with a person until one is whole alone. Bless you excellent write!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Hamza
Hamza

Jammu, Jammu & kashmir, India



About
Hamza .. that's me .. An Engineer by profession and a writer by Emotion ... I am 26... I am no different, I am not special .. I'm just a different face, and a few different fingerprints .. I am.. more..

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A Poem by Hamza