God is near

Its about God making things better. This is just a rough unfinished copy(:

Everyone has dark day, but now it's all just a haze.
You see I have a Father named God
Through all my tears I could see him nod
A gesture of assurance
Even though I felt I had no more endurance. 
When my knees gave out and my heart weighed heavy 
God showed up in his nice new Chevy.

Reviews

[Lizzie Mitchell]

I love this
the humor at the end is a testament
to how God can comfort you enough to laugh through adversity

[xhannyx]

Yes and that is exactly what I was trying to say with the humor(: thank you!

[Riley Justine]

Started very strong. A deep poem with some comic relief at the end. I usually am not one for comic reliefs but this one made me smile! Well done. However I would work on the second rhyming scheme (God and nod). It doesn't flow especially well, so, if you wish, I might find another word. If not it is fine as it is. Good job

[xhannyx]

Thank you very much. I'll work on that! :)

[SamAyel]

An effective beginning I think. The last line made me chuckle.

[xhannyx]

Haha thank you(: