Hindsight ( Blackpool August 1939)

Hindsight ( Blackpool August 1939)

A Poem by New Dawn



It's an old photograph,

Sepia in hue.

Just the two of you

on Blackpool promenade,

basking in the warmth

of late summer sunshine,

about to embark

on a lifetime of marriage.


The clothes are light

and the smiles lighter still,

a day full of candy floss

and 'kiss me quick' hats,

yet in the background

just beyond the cameras scope

a cloud is gathering,

dark,foreboding and evil

in its' intent.


It whispers of barrage balloons

and hideous gas masks

and promises broken

and declarations made.

You smile passed it

hands entwined, fervently hoping...

no, believing..

it might never come to pass.

© 2013 New Dawn


Author's Note

New Dawn
Inspired by a photograph of my grandparents, on holiday in Blackpool August 1939 - just weeks before the outbreak of war

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Loved it with fireworks bursting behind the ferris wheel. The war was just over. Guy Fawkes day bus ride.
Thanks for lighting it up again.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Top draw!

*bird*

Posted 11 Years Ago


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~ brilliantly written, dearest shelley... the detailing is stunning... and the sensitivity of the moment comes through very well too... it must've been an amazingly polarized time in the history of the world... (as we all know)... no one could've predicted the sheer scale and magnitude of what was about to happen... ~ you took me back to that moment... reading this piece was like time traveling... stunning work...

Posted 11 Years Ago


New Dawn

11 Years Ago

Thank you Serah - this photograph always intrigued me - the thought of holidaying when the world sto.. read more
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11 Years Ago

~ you're very welcome, my friend... ~ since i majored in history, i know that there was no way to pr.. read more
oh, but this is wonderful. i haven't heard the term candy floss in years. your imagery is superb and i could almost smell the sea air and hear the air raid sirens. i do so miss England. haven't been home since 68....lovely to read your hand!

Posted 11 Years Ago


New Dawn

11 Years Ago

glad you enjoyed it so much - i tried to capture the contrast between the comforting familiarity of .. read more
Perfectly capturing the beauty of an old photograph, full of future dreams and aspirations, as well as fear of what's to come, hidden from the camera by smiles, but no doubt still, in the thoughts of all at the time. Reminds me of pictures of my parents as children with their parents of the same time Seeing these photos as a child made me think the war didn't happen here or involve them in any way, yet growing up to understand the price everyone paid, paints differing images at each showing. My Mum was evacuated to Ireland for two years with her sisters and mother. And of course, that was a brilliant decision by those in charge. We live in Clydebbank, that was massively destroyed during the blitz due to the shipyards and industry in the town. And Mum still says it was better days back then because of the community spirit. Maybe she is right. I'll shut up now :-)
Beautifully penned.

Posted 11 Years Ago


New Dawn

11 Years Ago

I always felt it amazing that they could appear so carefree in this photograph knowing what was abou.. read more
Distant horizons

11 Years Ago

No, they do not :-)

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New Dawn

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