The fall

Drown the vagrant salvation

In the lies of a truthful prophet.

Reviews

[Lazerbagels]

Well, it's a good two lines, if i do say so myself. I like the contrast and word usage, some elaboration on the poem would be pretty spicy too though. :D

[dan nacario]

thanks for the review. actually, the additional lines to this poem is another separate poem so i will post it later.