The fall

The fall

A Poem by dan nacario

Drown the vagrant salvation
In the lies of a truthful prophet.

© 2014 dan nacario


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Well, it's a good two lines, if i do say so myself. I like the contrast and word usage, some elaboration on the poem would be pretty spicy too though. :D

Posted 10 Years Ago


dan nacario

10 Years Ago

thanks for the review. actually, the additional lines to this poem is another separate poem so i wil.. read more

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Added on May 22, 2014
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dan nacario
dan nacario

iriga city, cam. sur, Philippines



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