My fair dream

Elusive mem'ry of that fair thou ow'st,
And voice that is music to thine own ears,
In my dream your beauty did arisen,
Placid moment unfolded , ticking to an end,
Untold tale of my sweet desire,
Makes my love more strong than these proud peaks,
Perfect end came, with sorrows of rain.

Reviews

[Babe Roxx]

A beautiful classical style that emote a sweet surrendering...a lovely scribe, Dan.

[Cassie Fraga]

it speaks like honey poured over brown sugar... then sours with the rain. very nice twist. **keep that ink flowin honey, Im diggin your style**

[Kuhr Gred]

wow.. how sweet.. :) AMAZING ;D for me

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

I love that ending line, very nice write and title to go along with it.

[mackieboy]

this thing's making my tongue talk of the moon
It's amazing

[Between the grey]

found this write interesting and beuatiful. Awesome write

[Bruce Grimes]

you're a big fan of pro aren't you? :)

[DearSweetAgony]

Wow, each word moves through a readers mind like a dancing shadow. Wonderful imagery, wonderful description! I LOVED this write, its very soothing to ones soul.

[Rose of Gondor]

Beautiful. That's the only word for this. Beautiful. These words are what I'd expect to find in a Shakespeare sonnet or play. Beautiful and unearthly. :)

[Thea]

Very interesting...Your creativity once again amazed me...Well done!
:)))