Continuity

Continuity

A Poem by hardeep sabharwal
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Love avarise always

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I was there, so often,
Obsessed with you,
To find you, in other s faces,
Legs of desire, Continue,
But my flesh is not allowing,
I fear, I might lost myself,
in this continuity,
what I am is not a matter,
what I will be transforming into,
Have you ever become material,
In any sense,
I have flirted with my passion,
with a freaky laugh
now selling my bleshphemy
To complete a round
That will allow the continuity
To start afresh.

© 2014 hardeep sabharwal


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Sometimes it is hard to tear yourself away from what is familiar to you, and especially when you really love someone, even if it is for the best. This was beautifully articulated.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

hardeep sabharwal

9 Years Ago

Thanks Ashira macy a lot
ANyone can have my blasphemy for free

Posted 9 Years Ago


hardeep sabharwal

9 Years Ago

but my is still saleable not free :)
Hardeep, this is a wonderful poem of redemption and to rediscover yourself. As they everything is in mind, you can free or enslave, choice is yours. Please correct the spelling of "blashphemy ". Thanks for inviting.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

hardeep sabharwal

9 Years Ago

Thanks Avinash, also thanks for correcting the spell ,
Freshness demands newness and continuity. I like the underlying thoughts too. Bravo, sir.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

hardeep sabharwal

9 Years Ago

Thanks so much,
I m very much impressed with your writing, you write sso gud sir
Sami Khalil

9 Years Ago

My pleasure. Thank you kindly.

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Added on September 2, 2014
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hardeep sabharwal
hardeep sabharwal

patiala , punjab , India



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Hardeep Sabharwal describes himself as person of few words. He is one of millions of middle class Indians who do not have any ideology; they only want to live a peaceful life. The thing that hurts him.. more..

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