wildfire

wildfire

A Poem by hardeep sabharwal
"

Ideas without action are useless

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Wildfire, abruptly not only
smoulder in jungles,
but also in thoughts too
Blazingly ask
and not even wait for replies
Spread the ashes of
Burning questions
In the air
perhaps want to say
Only ideas are even
As unfruitful as ignorance
Brutally fingers
At all Intellectualists
And burble
Not give just ideas
But give these thoughts shapes too ...

© 2014 hardeep sabharwal


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There are various aspects of ideas, I had an idea to kill my boss but I didn't, would that have been useful? there was so much hatred that but I ignored them, was my ignorance unfruitful; the concept of idea work different for everyone, mostly on how someone perceive things. There are rotten ideas which take some shape and spoil the heck of generations...
P.S The idea was useful and it was good.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

hardeep sabharwal

9 Years Ago

Dear mayank, see again it is all about intellectualist s positive ideas which.can be fruitful, all o.. read more



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The way you express your words are so powerful. There's always such great insight in your work. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 9 Years Ago


hardeep sabharwal

9 Years Ago

Thanks a lot for appraisal briana :)
Very apt I agree with this theme " As unfruitful as ignorance
Brutally fingers
At all Intellectualists."
nicely penned.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

hardeep sabharwal

9 Years Ago

Thanks a lot prabha salimath
"Burning questions
In the air
perhaps want to say
Only ideas are even
As unfruitful as ignorance"

Posted 9 Years Ago


hardeep sabharwal

9 Years Ago

Thanks a lot sami
Sami Khalil

9 Years Ago

Welcome muchly....:)..........
Yes "ideas without action are useless" like plans without actions...but still in every rule there maybe an exemption.
As to word choice, you have it great! Nice lines. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

hardeep sabharwal

9 Years Ago

Thanks a lot Dhaye :)
Wildfires are nature's way of weeding out nature itself...burns out of control and forms other habits its aftermath...so if nature is the intellect here and the ideas are what become again after the fires have receded and died to ashes...and in turn create a new landscape of nature...others can view it in their own representation...but I see wildfires as a way for nature to rage wrath for whatever cost in its wake...in order to balance out progression...of course...I see things in a different spectrum as a reader and writer...

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

hardeep sabharwal

9 Years Ago

Thanks glen for a different interpretation :)
Glen Yumang Manese

9 Years Ago

you're welcome...
those burning questions can destroy if not addressed or ignored... you need to use those thoughts, ask more questions, discover the answers..... don't be afraid to seek.... listen to the replies... not just hearing the answers, but LISTEN.... ideas are useless unless put into action... so true.... give them life... DO something.... lovely write, awesome message... well done!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

hardeep sabharwal

9 Years Ago

Thanks a lot AprilRN :)
AprilRN1210

9 Years Ago

you're welcome:)
An interesting metaphor, wildfires spread quickly, especially if not handled in the correct manner, ideas can go either way, food for thought here.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

hardeep sabharwal

9 Years Ago

Thanks a lot Frieda P
Positive idea can catch on like wildfires and burn ignorance and backwardness into modernity and advancement...Bravo, sir...:)............

Posted 9 Years Ago


hardeep sabharwal

9 Years Ago

Thanks a lot for such a positive response sami :)
Sami Khalil

9 Years Ago

You are welcome...:).....................
There are various aspects of ideas, I had an idea to kill my boss but I didn't, would that have been useful? there was so much hatred that but I ignored them, was my ignorance unfruitful; the concept of idea work different for everyone, mostly on how someone perceive things. There are rotten ideas which take some shape and spoil the heck of generations...
P.S The idea was useful and it was good.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

hardeep sabharwal

9 Years Ago

Dear mayank, see again it is all about intellectualist s positive ideas which.can be fruitful, all o.. read more
Ideas can be mere thoughts but can create a havoc in wrong hands.. Also can be nothing more than a passing by thought if left unfulfilled.
The way you put it gives a force to it.. Just like a wildfire..

Posted 9 Years Ago


hardeep sabharwal

9 Years Ago

Thanks Sindu for your kind review :)

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patiala , punjab , India



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Hardeep Sabharwal describes himself as person of few words. He is one of millions of middle class Indians who do not have any ideology; they only want to live a peaceful life. The thing that hurts him.. more..

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