Desire

When you were leaving for a unique desire,
The spirit of my normal wish, drooped
Under the clumsyness of my skin,
In an era of whist, when emotions remain
Coiled, or like a barren womb,
A paralyzed cloud of feeling could not
Shed love on unsound reason,
Yes, I am insipid in my intoxicated nature,
Who shed voluptuousness of its skin,
In utter disgust and in search of truth,
And truth was always my El-dorado,
Ocean, I took you to merge myself,
Compose me and give me rhythm,
I am a mad in my composition, as
My unique desire is my normal wish.

Reviews

[Mayank]

This is a very good write when you are very much clear with the things you want/desire. There are lines which are beautifully crafted and are quite matured, these are things we must understand and follow... it was refreshing, like blowing an old dust from window sill.

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thankyou so much mayank :)

[Rene Salinas]

This writing Hardeep stands as very fluid to me, As if it did not take so much to write it because of the clarity of feeling. With that departure something was left different inside of you, and you realizing that you delve in and come to the conclusion that what imbued you gave you strength and purpose that it was not some romantic out of place even based purely on dreams and wishes or desires but something stronger.

What a nice expression

Thankyou

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thankyou so much Rene for a nice review :)

[Ashira Macy]

How absolutely beautiful. Your words flowed so brilliantly. I think this is one of my favorites of yours to be honest. So much emotion emanating off of it.

[hardeep sabharwal]

Thankyou so much Ashira, much appreciated,