Life As A Candle

life in that which of we humans and a candle

Can you imagine life, life as its made, life as its dismantled. Can you see the similarities in our lives in that in which of a candle. A candle is created by man just so are we. You put a flame to a candle, and it burns.     The essence of life is created. But the fumes from a candle as its burning can tell if its going to be loved by some,and by others hated, as like us. As you see a candle burn we watch its life pass by. So sad to think that like us the candle cries and we never pick up a tissue to wipe the hot tears from its eyes.             But the flame of life in us and that of a candle burns on, oh yes burns on. But if you take the air away we both suffocate and like all living things the flames of life goes away

Reviews

[Donna]

This is the most beautiful poem that I have read on here! I am serious! "So sad to think that like us the candle cries and we never pick up a tissue to wipe the hot tears from its eyes." My favorite line! This is really great!

[kelvin]

Well i truly thank you for your thoughts and feedings on this piece here I appreciate it and glad you like it

[kelvin]

I meant feelings haha not feeding

[marie]

we do indeed suffocate. some from lack of air, others from life, and the list goes on and on, beautiful write great job :)

[kelvin]

thank you so much for your thoughts here

[marie]

No prob :)

[Sami Khalil]

The essence of life is created. But the fumes from a candle as its burning can tell if its going to be loved by some,and by others hated, as like us.
A very powerful write . A must read.

[kelvin]

Oh Thank you so much for that review i was just watching a candle burn one night and it came to me I'm glad you think it's a strong piece

[Sami Khalil]

I wrote about candles . I like this one for you compare it to life or us...

[kelvin]

yes, if you have that poem on here tell me the name i would like to check it out

[Sami Khalil]

I can't remember but if I do I will let you know. Thank you too...

[Sami Khalil]

It is called " Scented candles "

[kelvin]

i couldn't find it but ill look again later though

[Sami Khalil]

It is there in one of the pages . Click on each page and you will find it...:)

[kelvin]

okay i will

[Sami Khalil]

^^~^^