Bumps In Life's Roads

Bumps In Life's Roads

A Poem by kelvin
"

life throws us bumps sometimes

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In this destination of life there's things,or better yet steps that intensifies happiness,
and or intensifies aggravation of the mind.

Which intertwines the paths taken in life's roads with the good and with the bad.
So is this where the saying goes only the strong will survive?

As to where the strong will overcome,and unravel the intertwines of the right and the wrong paths
taken in life. leaving the weak and the callous to settle for anything but best.

So what intensifies and magnifies the fire that burns bright within our souls
while some burns bright and then others burn so dull.

Its all in our mind and in our hearts to strive to get to the path that's right,
and the rest is up to our bodies if able, to prepare itself for the fight.

                Add some acceleration to your soul's inner flame.

© 2012 kelvin


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A wise message on the journey of life and thesoul and how we achieve outer and inner happiness. You raise a lot of good questions for readers to answer. In my humble opinion it is the smartest mentally , spiritually and emotionally ... But God will take care of His creation whether weak or strong but they have to do their part too...
Keep the river flowing with wisdom...

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kelvin

11 Years Ago

Thank you kindly for your thoughts here you have a very good constructive view on looking on things .. read more
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

My pleasure as always... :)



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i loved it!!
actually it relates to one of my poems i wrote some time back "life's uncertainities"
but i didnt post it here.
i loved the message i think it really teaches us a great lot about the 21st century life.
continue insipiring my friend!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


kelvin

11 Years Ago

well thank you for your kind words my friend and you keep inspiring to
deeply inspirational. We poets think incredibly deep and your poetry only stands to prove this. Much wisdom penned here, brilliantly.

Posted 11 Years Ago


kelvin

11 Years Ago

Yes i agree. We poets do tend to think deeply. I thank you for your kind thoughts here
'Add some acceleration to your soul's inner flame' I love that line...
I can hear this one being read aloud...lot of soul in those words.

Posted 11 Years Ago


kelvin

11 Years Ago

yeah haha thank you yeah i like that to
A wise message on the journey of life and thesoul and how we achieve outer and inner happiness. You raise a lot of good questions for readers to answer. In my humble opinion it is the smartest mentally , spiritually and emotionally ... But God will take care of His creation whether weak or strong but they have to do their part too...
Keep the river flowing with wisdom...

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kelvin

11 Years Ago

Thank you kindly for your thoughts here you have a very good constructive view on looking on things .. read more
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

My pleasure as always... :)

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Added on December 12, 2012
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