Revive

Revive

A Poem by Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)
"

for my muse

"
Watching the sunset
Remembering old thoughts
and promises
I care about

Hair is turning gray
Legs are getting weak
Eyes are not feeling good
with the darkening of sky

Visiting an old place
Words are still there
Like what are inside me
Crying for help

The voice is getting louder
I know I will write again
Trying to build the dream story
Of my love that never fades.

© 2022 Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)


Author's Note

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)
I need to write again before I forget how to do it.

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Believe me you will never forget how to write for it is in yiur blood. This poem is a perfect example.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

1 Year Ago

I want to believe that. Thank you so much for the insight, sir.
the love of the muse is strong...the attraction compelling...
she often will take a hiatus...but if we are patient, she comes back full force...and this poem is a good
start to that.
j.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

1 Year Ago

Somebody said to me that writing feeds the soul and I feel the same.
Thank you for sharing y.. read more

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Added on July 20, 2022
Last Updated on July 20, 2022
Tags: friendship, love, soulmate, writing

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Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)
Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

Philippines



About
Hello! I am Dhaye, a public secondary school teacher, a passionate artist "married" to her dream. I write in different perspectives. So please know NOT all my works are about me. .. more..

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