EdgyPoem5000

A Poem by heckos

listen close and listen well

i wish i’d saved you when you fell

but alas i was too slow

and you tumbled down below

deep to the depths, into the earth

to the devil, prove your worth

become the dark

become the night

the difference stark

from former light

© 2016 heckos

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Comments are appreciated, but I'm not interested in actual critique. Thank you!

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Paul Bell

Well I suppose when you tumble that far down, there's only one way up. Or is there, I wonder.

Posted 7 Years Ago

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Added on August 6, 2016
Last Updated on August 6, 2016
Tags: angel, devil, heaven, hell, demon

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heckos

NY

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I'm an art student studying animation and illustration, but I also have a love for reading and writing. My favorite genre is fantasy, and I have a webcomic called Frames. more..

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