Inner War.

Inner War.

A Poem by E.j.aka.Hannah

Destiny is a delusion,
Faith is a illusion,
Lust is a perfection,
Death is a religion,
And life is a collision.



Return to
me.


Return to
my peace.


Return to
my sea.


Tranquility. Inner life.


The feelings all for
me.


Buddha, Allah, kings of the book.

The world would be at a still,
if we all shared the sa
me look.

© 2010 E.j.aka.Hannah


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This is a powerful confession of soul searching.
There are many things said in this poem that are
wise. Its funny how the logic in this poem creates
such emotion. It's short and sweet...although there
are lines that could spark hour long conversations easily.
There is a whole lot underneath the surface here.
You also challenged beliefs and did so in a fashion that
was not militant or condescending. You have a very charismatic
way of getting people to listen.Your taboo writing
here is brilliant. I can only imagine the things you have
talked people into doing. (Shakes head sadly)


Posted 14 Years Ago


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E.j.aka.Hannah
E.j.aka.Hannah

Chipley, FL



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Name:EJ Occupation: Artist & Wandering Soul Info: Im quiet, funny, independant, loyal, & honest. Nothing else is needed to be said. more..

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