I hope you never wanted love

Through the shadowy trees of the midnight hour,
I can see you through the crooked and cracked branches,

Your glowing yellow eyes pierce deep in my soul,

Your fangs made of your lovers neck bares its existence.

"I want them to hear you scream." 

"Or we can come out of this one the same team."

Your skin that looks like its made out of paper,

Your ego that is the size of two twin towers,

Your melancholy eccentrics and your apathetic demeanor.

"Bring me fire, bring me ice, bring me blood."

"But I'll be careful not to drown you in a flood."

You are the reason why my existence is afraid of you.

Reviews

[roy mccarthy]

this is awesome,
dark,dreary,
almost like something poe would write,
but of course unique in your own way!

[WindSong]

This poem is so perfectly crafted I was drawn in by each and every word within. Great imagery dominates the solemn mood, of possibly, the unknown that lurks in the shadows between the trees. A very beautiful poem.

[Ripple of Aqua]

Very constricting, in a good way, this makes me shrink at the terror. Very powerful words at the end.

[amdc101]

The last line. Whoa. Great write.

[VelvetRosetta]

Dark and inviting, to fear can be an exciting feeling, it can sometimes draw us toward someone instead of making us shy away...
Liked this one!

[Lily Mae]

I love this..an interesting write.. it takes my mind through the dark trails of fear of love...xx :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Last line twisted the poem from no fear and hate to the existence of fear.
"Bring me fire, bring me ice, bring me blood."
"But I'll be careful not to drown you in a flood."
The poem was direct and hard. The lines strong and powerful.
"I want them to hear you scream."
"Or we can come out of this one the same team."
Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Just Cat]

An interesting piece, although I have to be honest, I'm not entirely sure what it's about. Interesting all the same though :)

[FemmeSpookyCorpse]

This is a very deep, vivid, meaningful piece! The points you make are strong...great work!

[Jupiter Jazz]

I take it this is a poem about vampires?
As soon as I read the first line I liked it.
Good use of imagery and vocabulary.
Yosh!