Forever Broken

Is it right

to sit and let this die

were slowly letting go

like this storys better untold

I'm sitting here waiting for the sound of the drum

Just waiting for that one day to come

When you both realize how much i'm in pain

With this burden upon my shoulders, driving me insane

I wish you could feel what i am feeling

The hurt and suffering i bear needs reveling

The slow tearing at my heat

With the dripping of its blood beginning to start

I can't believe it got this bad

I can't believe i LET it get like this

I'm angry at myself for letting us drift

I have fought so hard to keep our friendship alive

I'm running out of will, i'm trying to survive

Everyday i try so hard not to think about it, that is my goal

But no matter what i do i come across the memories that seem to burn in my soul

It can't be right

to sit and let this die

We were once so close

we can't let what we had disappear forever

Reviews

[Lily Mae]

I think it's silly to fight it..when it's simply mean't to be it will be. And all we do is torture ourselves by putting up the fight..xo Perfectly expressed emotions..xo

[reflectingus]

Well expressed, thoughts have been penned down pretty well. And I can relate to this poem as well :/ Sometimes people you love and are really close to, slowly drift away. It's pretty sad, but if you can't do anything, then you're forced to move on.
Anyway, loved it, the flow was nice. :)

[Xhiljola]

nice write...you're pouring out your heart, which is necessary in poetry (or at least I think so) but try to be a little more cautious of technicalities in your writing...regardless I enjoyed it! Keep writing

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

As much as I enjoyed this piece, I can't resist the urge for a little honesty in saying there is a lot of corrections that need to be done here for the reader to get the full concept of the piece as a hole. I can sense the emotions and all in all this piece is great as far as emotional and heartfelt.

Nicely done,
~Anna Rose

[Roe]

this is a great write i really enjoyed reading this.
Correction:The slow tearing at my heat......i think you meant to put the slow tearing at my heart..........but you mite have meant for it to say heat