life

life

A Poem by hillzz
"

life is.......

"

life

is little

life is rough

life is

funny

life is tough

life is bigger

life can be fun

life can be a mess

life can tear you down

but cause life's so little

and only so tough

you can only be rough

so

take a stand

take a bow

stand up for your rights

and never give up

cause life is little

and life is rough

but make it worth it

to never give up

 

© 2010 hillzz


Author's Note

hillzz
im dealing with alot of bully going on in my highschool and feel like im ready to give up. but my friends have helped me through the bad times
and there there till the endand thats all you need

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Very good poem! and don't worry about the bullies, just remember, your the bigger person, and you well never go down to their level!

Posted 14 Years Ago


this shows that you are on your way! i agree, it does get your point across clearly. great write!

Posted 14 Years Ago


awh thanks shows alot of wht i am ...dealing with all this stuff at school....stupid vp's
hoping to become a writer when im older
...............

Posted 14 Years Ago


i love this Hillzz. It's really good and it get's your point across so well !!!!

Posted 14 Years Ago



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hillzz
hillzz

welland, ontario, Canada



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