Why me?

A branch of of my poem last chances

Still must you persist

Telling me it will all work out

Well what point is there

To getting giddy with love

Only to be let down

I don't see the point

In a early damaged heart

Unnesesary drama

Added to my daily life

But how to say no

To someone who doesn't understand

To someone who hasn't seen

Their best friends say they are in love

While you roll your eyes

And wait for the day

Where she sits crying in your arms

Telling you he was perfect

And you saying he was a jerk

Why me?

Reviews

[Sweets]

"Unnesesary drama
Added to my daily life
But how to say no
To someone who doesn't understand
To someone who hasn't seen
Their best friends say they are in love"
Wow. I truly liked this..
and you're such a talented writer, I can't believe that someone your age writes like that :)
This is wonderful, keep writing and you'll hopefully succeed :)

[SpokenWord]

It is so hard to see the truth when your blinded by love. You want to be fair and not only look at the bad or red flags but you want to consider the good. It is the good that they do that keeps us on the hook, we say see they love me and we ignore all other flags until it is too late. If only we had that crystal ball that told the truth through all the haze.

[QC]

all i could think when i read this was "exactly". you seem to have a really clear perspective on things, given your age. nevertheless, it was wonderful.

[Gone]

Wisdom rests where she is welcome. She is no respector of age, only of her welcome. This poem displays you one of her friends and a rock to those around you. Nicely written poem too.