Alone in misery

Theres nothing I can do

Nowhere I can turn

No friendly faces greet me

Or so it feels

When you fall into the pit

There is NO escaping

Until their done with you the little monsters

Whispering in your ear

Telling you to just jump

I am going to die

That's how it feels

And no one cares

Truly they only care I don't disapear

I want what I hate

Need what I despise

Love

Author's Note

It's meant to be scattered and random, NO GRAMMAR NAZIS!!

Reviews

[Sweets]

I can relate to this!
A very well written piece!
and i loved the randomness in here xD
Great work! Keep going ! :)

[QC]

the scatteredness of the poem is really great and if anyone tells you it's not, then they've lost their minds, obviously. i can truly say i know how you feel. 100%. gah, this poem is freakin awesome. lol