Just close enough...

Just close enough...

A Poem by Call Me Blu

Just close enough to feel
His heartbeat
His breath
Just far enough to feel
The distance
The desire
Just close enough to want
His approval
His love
Just far enough to want
The distance to close
The gap to fill
Just close enough to see
His perfection
His indifference
Just far enough to see
What will never be mine

© 2011 Call Me Blu


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i liked the repetition in this piece, nice job :)

Posted 12 Years Ago
This poem was very well written. The emotions bled through the words. Well done! :)

~Lizzy~

Posted 12 Years Ago
great poem i enjoyed reading(:

Posted 12 Years Ago

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