Keep Climbin'

There must be something greater,

in this movement we call life.

We all just strive for safety,

no guarantee that it's right.

Money can create conflict,

but it can also open doors,

so stay above the onslaught.

Keep climbin' for higher floors.

Reviews

[CBH]

Love that you kept movement a theme throughout. It really brings it together. It's a shorter piece, which helps you get the point faster. Great work!

[Sami Khalil]

Keep climbin' for higher floors.

[Sami Khalil]

A well written poem...Pen on....:)...................

[Harrisen Viator]

Thank you!! I'll definitely keep going with it! :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)...............