WASTING LIFE

WASTING LIFE

A Poem by Hobbit
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I stare at my screen wondering, 
Wondering why I'm wasting my life, 
Doing the things I'm doing. 

Not only staring at my coumputer screen, 
But my house, 
My life. 

I've been given a precious life, 
So why am I wasting it, 
Throwing it away? 

Why do I do this? 
Why can't I stop? 
Why can't I break free? 

I can do this, 
I can stop, 
I can break free. 

The only one who is stopping me, 
Holding me back, 
Is me.

© 2014 Hobbit


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I love it but is is very sad, only I can relate to this one very much, sadly enough I know those feelings.

Posted 9 Years Ago


A splendid read and write...:).....................

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hobbit

9 Years Ago

Thank you!
Sami Khalil

9 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)..................
Very honest. I think we can all relate. Motivational ending

Posted 9 Years Ago


Hobbit

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your review!

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