Where Did we Go Wrong?

Where Did we Go Wrong?

A Poem by Hope Ashing
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Wrote this after a break-up and needed to let it out, and I finally did

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When I fall do you catch me?
No, no, no you don't
When I cry do you say it's gonna be okay?
No, no, no you don't

You let me fall, you let me hurt
You don't save me, you don't help me
You don't do good, you don't try to help
You don't take responsibility, you don't give respect

You said you wouldn't leave me
What did you do?
You left me there by myself
Why did you do it?
You gave me up for her

I kept my promises, you kept your pride
I loved you, you loved her
I stayed by your side, you left me in the dirt
Where did we go wrong?

When you fall will I catch you?
No, no, no I won't
When you cry will I say it's gonna be okay?
No, no, no I won't

© 2012 Hope Ashing


Author's Note

Hope Ashing
After writing this, I felt so much more relaxed and happy. I hope you like it, or at least can relate to it. :-D

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Added on December 10, 2012
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Hope Ashing
Hope Ashing

Riverside, CA



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I am an 11-year old amateur songwriter who is stage-fright. When life doesn't work out I usually go to the home in my heart and soul, which is music and songwriting and singing. Even when life does wo.. more..

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