Take My Hand

Hi Honey, why don't you just take my hand?

Hi Honey, why don’t you take my hand?
                I’m ready to fly away from here
                Won’t you take the journey, baby?
                We’ll take off and fly as high as we like
                We’ll fly over the sea, the beautiful sea
                And land on an island unknown
                When we get there we’ll climb the trees
                So high we can touch the clouds
                And we’ll make a campfire in the middle of the forest
                And we’ll talk the night away
                And when you’re ready to leave we’ll leave, my dear
                But if you want to stay we’ll stay
Hi Honey, why don’t you take my hand?
                I’m ready for a change of scene.

Author's Note

I went to boardwalk today and I was watching all the seagulls flying around the beach and it inspired this. Comments and crit appreciated :3

Reviews

[AmeliaElizabeth]

This is really nice. I like the imagery.

[FANTASYKNIGHT]

nice, very cute, in a sense. It's obviously not a very deep, but creative, I love the idea you have of adventures. Very Lovely little poem :)

[Sincerely, Alex]

Really nice write!

I love the imagary in this piece. It makes me want to escape my scenery more than I usually do.

Makes me wish the summer wasn't ending. I really like this though.


Alex