I will

Look at you you savage beast
As you walk around on hind legs
I hope you fall in the of hell
Cause I will let freeze in the ice
And I will let you die of hunger while you sleep
Cause I will make you beg for forgiveness at my
And dont give me those sly eye you big fat thieve
Cause am tired of your threats and your dark heart
And I hope you die from the cold inside your heart

Author's Note

I made the genre poertry cause I did not know what to put it as

Reviews

[Destiny Crawford]

Very nice job :)
"I hope you fall in the of hell" doesnt sound right. What "of hell"? The pit? The hole? Please fix that so I understand. Thank you :)
"Cause I will make you beg for forgiveness at my" doesnt sound right either. At you feet? At your face? I wont know until you fix that.
Please make sure before you publish your poems that they make sence to the reader.
But, over all, I really enjoyed this. Thank you for sharing :)

[The Pretender]

ouch. that's some pretty deep hate going on there.