Here Kitty, Kitty...

Here Kitty, Kitty...

A Poem by A.j. Dru
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Poem I wrote a long while back. Just found it and thought I'd share.

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Here Kitty, Kitty...

By AJ Dru

 

Oh my, oh my,

Do I truly spy

the tiniest of tiny,

little white lies?

Simple omission of

The Truth.

 

Click, click, click--

The endless tick--

Tock of the goddam clock

As time slips

So selfishly away.

 

Me, in my cloudy room,

Alone with my cigarettes

And depressing thoughts, regrets.

I could scream, and

I could shout.

But never quite loud enough...

 

Looking back alwasy hurts,

Like a broken neck.

Friends lost, all but a few.

Enought f**k-ups to fillthe shelves

Of a dozen silent libraries.

Lies and apologies galore...

 

If somewhere out there,

In the cosmos of space,

God sits watching from behind

A bowl of buttered popcorn,

I'm sure He's laughed and cried

And even covered His eyes at times...

But, I fear I disappoint.

 

For I always hold true to what I am,

And that is my Tragedy--

In lieu of comfortable ignorance,

I opt to poke my nose

And prove once again that

Curiosity killed the Cat.

© 2013 A.j. Dru


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Love the structure of the poem, and the idea seems to capture the regret and depression...anyway great job, it is truly something "fresh"

Posted 6 Years Ago


A.j. Dru

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much for reading! I like that: "fresh." It really fits. I'm just getting back into writ.. read more
starts out with a great flow and rhythm , your rhyme scheme was pretty much gone after the third stanza leaving the reader wanting for more, great starting idea, looks like you have some potential for an excellent writer you just need to polish your style a little to remain more consistent.

Posted 6 Years Ago


marie

6 Years Ago

well... the "lol" think yeah its a system of this generation, one of the few things i share with my .. read more
A.j. Dru

6 Years Ago

Your effort itself is evidence of potential. So many youth waste their lives on TV and video games n.. read more
marie

6 Years Ago

:)i don't mind your rambling, its rather inspiring, thanks for sharing your views perhaps one day i.. read more

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Added on January 18, 2013
Last Updated on January 18, 2013
Tags: poetry, depression, time, lies, regret, curiosity

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A.j. Dru

Syracuse, UT



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