the rain

blah blah blah

now the rain came

from times more sorrow

 

for it soaked him

and turned him somber blue

 

clouds form of days yester

swirling thoughts that blow stern

 

the rain, the rain, "go away"

but prepare for its advent  "another day"

Reviews

[James Helm]

Very very well written my friend. I can hardly believe how much feeling you put into this short of a poem. your rating is well earned.

[hundi]

thank you so much , it was one of those, just open the door to yourself and pull it out , and next thing you know your like "wow that just wrote itself", sometimes it's very magical , again thank you

[James Helm]

No problem, I look forward to more of your material and I may have to try that method of writing myself.

[hundi]

if you liked this one , you might like "the room" on my page , it was the same process,

[James Helm]

Al make that my next read.