As close as Sin

As close as Sin

A Poem by huntnteen
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I have been in a battle versus myself attempting to change my personality before i start college next year, this is a good example of how i see the two sides of me

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I run to fight
fight to run
looking frantically
through the sites of my gun
why am i here?
why arent i there?
I am starting to wonder
does anyone care?
i look for the enemy
and give a start
the evil i saw
can tear me apart
i sart to wonder
how you can win
a battle against something
as close as sin
this enemy i fear
is somthing i see
when i look in the glass
for the enemy is me.

© 2009 huntnteen


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Wow.. really great flow here.. and the philosophy behind this can lead to some many metaphoric meanings.. I mean really.. we all have good and bad in us in some many ways.. you could be trying to change and bring out more bad to fit in or become more good for your studies.. you could also be struggling with issues here.. a trauma.. etc..etc..etc.. I could keep going on this one! Many would be able to relate with this on some level.. whether battling inner-demons.. various habits.. really good work .. I enjoyed it! =)

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Wow.. really great flow here.. and the philosophy behind this can lead to some many metaphoric meanings.. I mean really.. we all have good and bad in us in some many ways.. you could be trying to change and bring out more bad to fit in or become more good for your studies.. you could also be struggling with issues here.. a trauma.. etc..etc..etc.. I could keep going on this one! Many would be able to relate with this on some level.. whether battling inner-demons.. various habits.. really good work .. I enjoyed it! =)

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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huntnteen

Windsor, CA



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