Reminders

Reminders

A Poem by huntnteen

As I chase the deer,
I have nothing to fear,
for running through the wood,
is where I belong, all is good.
The deer's beauty and grace,
remind me of your movements and face,
I sit in the meadow in the forest,
surrounded by flowers better then any florist's,
I take in the lovely scent
With out a dime spent,
The gorgeous smell,
reminds me of you in ways I cant tell.
As I lay in the grass,
I watch the birds pass,
and the pretty bird song,
comes lofting along,
and the beautiful sound,
reminds me of your voice, my heart pounds.
When I spend time in the wilderness,
surrounded by gentleness,
everything I find,
reminds me of you, which I don't mind.

© 2009 huntnteen


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huntnteen
Ignore spelling and grammar

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Simply beautiful, and I find nothing wrong with this at all. The rhyme and flow are fine as well.


Krys

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on September 30, 2009

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huntnteen
huntnteen

Windsor, CA



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