Teri Yaad Mein...

Teri Yaad Mein...

A Poem by Slender Smile/Husna Tayyab
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This is the other one which was published in my college magazine after 'Hame Kya Pata Tha'

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Teri Yaad Mein…
 
 
 
 
 
 
Hum ne na jaane
kitne din guzare
kitne raat guzare
Teri yaad mein...
Lamha lamha ghat ta nahi
din guzarti nahi raat kat ti nahi
Teri yaad mein...
Hum ne khud ko sambhala bohot,
hum ne khud ko samjhaya bohot.
Magar ye dil,
na sambhalta hain,
na samajhta hain
Teri yaad mein...
Aankhon ne tujhe dhoonda bohot,
aankhon ne aasu bahaye bohot,
Teri yaad mein...
Teri yaad bhi sanam batakar nahi aati,
aati bhi hain to akela nahi chodti...
Saath jo teri yaad ka ho,
toh tham jata hain waqt,
ruk jaati hain duniya.
Ab toh bas ek hi saath hai hamara is duniya mein...
Teri yaad...
Teri yaad...
Aur bas teri yaad...
 

© 2009 Slender Smile/Husna Tayyab


Author's Note

Slender Smile/Husna Tayyab
Most of you cannot understand what I have written. I have already started working on a translation of both my urdu/hindi poems. Please be patient with me.

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it's beautiful...straight from the heart and so true..."moments without the one you love"...living with memories...nights and days alike...endless attempts to catch a glimpse...the tears shed...all alone in the shadows of memories and thoughts...the heart stops and so does time...
maybe that's what love is all about...

great work again dear...

regards
barricade...

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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Absolutely beautiful language, and the colors and text flow down the page like a mountain river... Bahut Bahut Shukriya!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Everything about your piece is beautiful,
the picture, the color arrangement,
even the language.
I cannot speak the language, but I am not
deaf to beauty and I read you loud and
clear as you speak the language of mankind.

Thank you for this !

Rated 100 %

----- Eagle Cruagh

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow..!!this was beautiful....
you write so good in hindi....!!
i can never write like that in hindi...!!
you did a great job....!!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I cannot understand what you have written, but the words look like hey are saying something beautiful.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ah! Bahut khoob :)
This one was really beautiful specially the closing lines
"Ab toh bas ek hi saath hai hamara is duniya mein...
Teri yaad...
Teri yaad...
Aur bas teri yaad..."
Though I'm not very good with hindi but I will also try to write something in my mother tongue too, soon...very soon :)

Great work here !

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

it's beautiful...straight from the heart and so true..."moments without the one you love"...living with memories...nights and days alike...endless attempts to catch a glimpse...the tears shed...all alone in the shadows of memories and thoughts...the heart stops and so does time...
maybe that's what love is all about...

great work again dear...

regards
barricade...

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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