The Key!

this is about ma bestfriend that moved away

 

you stand out of a crowd of 10

you have that touch to make ma broken heart mend

your there by ma side everystep of the way

and now that i see it i want you to stay.

You can touch the stars in a sky of grey

and every moment we spare every step that we take i will treasure forever.

theres a hunderd thousand memories and a couple thousand tears and over six hundred adventures in only a short 5 years

im not ready to say goodbye and i know i never will

The words goodbye seem to always kill

but deepinside its the key to that locked door that veryones been lookin for!

Author's Note

Ignore alll the grammar and problems!! i just wanna know wat you think of ma work!

Reviews

[ebur™]

this poem was so touching and descriptive that i started to feel sad. ;( i loved it though :) great job!

[Deathly Pain]

SUPER AWESOME JESSICA!

[WriterMe]

This makes me want to go 'awww' Haha, sorry. It was just so touching =] It was also sad in a way. I can totally relate it to the theme. Great work =]